In Momma’s Shoes

By mmsocks September 10, 2013 kidlit poet poetry poetry for kids

Click-Clack, Click-Clack,
Click-Clack – Clack!
Momma wants
Her shoes back.
She laughs out loud,
She gives chase –
Click-Clack, Click-Clack
Click-Clack – RACE!

Momma wants
Her shoes back.
Click-Clack, Click-Clack,
Click-Clack – Clack!

8 thoughts on “In Momma’s Shoes”

Michelle Heidenrich Barnes

September 13, 2013 at 5:28 pm Reply

Yep, I can relate to this one. 🙂 Even as a preteen, my daughter likes to try on my shoes and clomp around the house from time to time. Before long, she’ll probably be borrowing them. Nice touch to include an image of your notebook.
- mmsocks
  
  November 15, 2013 at 11:08 am Reply
  
  Thanks Michelle!
Keri Collins Lewis

September 14, 2013 at 11:23 am Reply

Love the drawing and peek at your notebook! I like the urgency of chase/RACE!
- mmsocks
  
  November 15, 2013 at 11:07 am Reply
  
  Thank you – please visit anytime!
Bridget Magee

September 14, 2013 at 10:23 pm Reply

Fun! You’ve captured the essence of this mother/daughter moment I’ve experienced with my two girls. Nice. =)
- mmsocks
  
  November 15, 2013 at 11:06 am Reply
  
  Thank you – i don’t think i could’ve written without the influence from my daughter.
bjleepoet

September 15, 2013 at 9:27 am Reply

Love it! Nice to see your notebook as well!
- mmsocks
  
  November 15, 2013 at 11:05 am Reply
  
  i always think that gives a little extra to the personality of the poem. Salud!

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